Need honest opinions

[cutlassclass]

Okay, I know you guys tend to be brutally honest and I need some real constructive criticism. So have at it, this is a stetch I just did for my summer art class. I never thought in a million years that I could even draw something that didnt look like a 4 year old did it.

 

[vroomchu]

the grapes are too square, other than tha looks good

 

[joestang]

better than anything I could draw, I say good job.

 

[smooth]

I would suggest changing your light angle to a 45*, it's easier to achieve a cymetrical shadow.The glass looks good, cheese in the middle appears to be floating do to the angle of the glass base.

That is a great start for your first dimensional drawing